The Perfectly Imperfect Limerick
Nothing is perfect, but then again it
Is a dichotomy, antithesis
Confuses the mind
And drives man insane
So I’ve ditched analysing self-analysis
The Perfectly Imperfect Limerick
Nothing is perfect, but then again it
Is a dichotomy, antithesis
Confuses the mind
And drives man insane
So I’ve ditched analysing self-analysis
Good one.. hats off!
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Thank you 🙂
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anytym 😛
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“So I’ve ditched analysing self-analysis” work of genius, this line really hit me deep
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Great, appreciate the feedback, thank you 🙂
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Lol! Gonna leave it behind, huh? 🙂
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Well, it’s starting to leave itself behind, I’m beginning to enjoy just watching it!
Thanks for commenting 🙂
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Good one. It would seem to me that you could drop the ‘It’s” on the second line to perfect the emjambment so “it is” continued from the first line…but what do I know…I’m just a cat 😉 =^,,^=
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Many thanks for taking the time to comment.
Trouble is that changes the beats of the first 2 lines so they aren’t the same.
Will have a think about it. Well spotted, thanks.
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